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		<title>Introducing the BookWiki</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 11 Aug 2008 20:19:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[So here is my screen cast, using Jing, to introduce my BookWiki to my class.
Introduction to BookWiki
Misty
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So here is my screen cast, using Jing, to introduce my BookWiki to my class.</p>
<p><a href="http://www.screencast.com/users/mburnworth/folders/Jing/media/1164c8e8-3a5f-467c-83ae-e911f9e6e97f">Introduction to BookWiki</a></p>
<p>Misty</p>
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		<title>Evaluation</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 11 Aug 2008 15:12:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[To demonstrate success with this project the students will:


Write three book reviews on their BookWiki page.
Comment on three other students&#8217; BookWiki pages.
Add at least one image to the BookWiki page.
Use text formatting features (titles, bullets, section dividers, etc.) to enhance writing.
Include the items listed in the class&#8217; co-created rubric (example below).
The class will co-create a [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>To demonstrate success with this project the students will:</p>
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<ul>
<li>Write three book reviews on their BookWiki page.</li>
<li>Comment on three other students&#8217; BookWiki pages.</li>
<li>Add at least one image to the BookWiki page.</li>
<li>Use text formatting features (titles, bullets, section dividers, etc.) to enhance writing.</li>
<li>Include the items listed in the class&#8217; co-created rubric (example below).</li>
<li>The class will co-create a rubric for what to include in each BookWiki.<a href="http://burnworthedu.edublogs.org/files/2008/08/picture-1.png"><img class="aligncenter size-medium wp-image-22" src="http://burnworthedu.edublogs.org/files/2008/08/picture-1-300x221.png" alt="" width="300" height="221" /></a></li>
<li>Ultimately the students will work on the BookWiki on their own, and go above and beyond the expectations.</li>
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		<title>Implementation</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 09 Aug 2008 16:42:28 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>burnworthedu</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Introduction

Introduce the students to online book discussions by presenting some current online book clubs.
http://www.girlzone.com/html/intowords.html 
http://www.planetbookclub.com/kids/booktalk.htm 

Background Knowledge

Discuss previous ways book reports are completed.
Student groups come up with why they like or don&#8217;t like doing them.

Present Material/Practice

Introduce the site to the students.  https://nheroom522.wikispaces.com/ 
Demonstrate  how to edit wiki pages, and how to add pictures, [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<h3>Introduction</h3>
<ul>
<li>Introduce the students to online book discussions by presenting some current online book clubs.</li>
<li><a href="http://www.girlzone.com/html/intowords.html target=">http://www.girlzone.com/html/intowords.html </a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.planetbookclub.com/kids/booktalk.htm target=">http://www.planetbookclub.com/kids/booktalk.htm </a></li>
</ul>
<h4>Background Knowledge</h4>
<ul>
<li>Discuss previous ways book reports are completed.</li>
<li>Student groups come up with why they like or don&#8217;t like doing them.</li>
</ul>
<h4>Present Material/Practice</h4>
<ul>
<li>Introduce the site to the students.  <a href="https://nheroom522.wikispaces.com/ targer=">https://nheroom522.wikispaces.com/ </a></li>
<li>Demonstrate  how to edit wiki pages, and how to add pictures, links, and widgets.</li>
<li>Have them add to their page by creating a personal note about themselves and the genres they enjoy reading.</li>
</ul>
<h4>More Practice</h4>
<ul>
<li>The first BookWiki will be about a book that I read aloud.</li>
</ul>
<ul>
<li>We will write notes together about the theme, our opinions, and evidence to support our claims. We will create a rubric of what should be included in the response.</li>
<li>Then each student will add to their wiki page. Students will then be required to read and comment on two to three students pages. This will entail modeling how to log on, how to read and respond, and how to publish their comments.</li>
</ul>
<h4>Elicit Performance</h4>
<ul>
<li>The final step will be for the students to add to the BookWiki about a book that they read on their own, and add comments about three other student&#8217;s BookWiki.</li>
</ul>
<h4>Provide Feedback and Assess</h4>
<ul>
<li>Students will provide feedback to each other through the comments section on each page.</li>
<li>Teacher will assess and give feedback on the comments section as well.</li>
</ul>
<h4>Enhance Transfer</h4>
<ul>
<li>Students will be encouraged to create a Voice Thread, Podcast, or an iGoogle web page for a book or author.</li>
</ul>
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		<title>Development</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 09 Aug 2008 16:16:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Development
Prior to Presenting
I plan on using Wikispaces for my site, therefore I will need to:

Set up a class Wikispaces site with tabs for a home page, and a page for each student to discuss their books.
Set up usernames for the Wikispaces site using gmail addresses to represent the students (ex: nhe522#1@gmail.com for student #1).
The Wikispaces [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<h3>Development</h3>
<h4>Prior to Presenting</h4>
<h4>I plan on using Wikispaces for my site, therefore I will need to:</h4>
<ul>
<li>Set up a class Wikispaces site with tabs for a home page, and a page for each student to discuss their books.</li>
<li>Set up usernames for the Wikispaces site using gmail addresses to represent the students (ex: nhe522#1@gmail.com for student #1).</li>
<li>The Wikispaces site should have a sidebar that lists student pages.</li>
<li>Create two or three example pages for the students to use as a reference for what is expected.</li>
</ul>
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		<title>Cool and Easy</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Aug 2008 00:41:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Have you heard of Animoto?  It is a site where they take your pictures, music of your choice, and they mix it into a cool movie.  Check out the one I made in about 15 minutes.
http://animoto.com/play/mGYLYzrN50HMZBtHJboEBg
Misty
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Have you heard of Animoto?  It is a site where they take your pictures, music of your choice, and they mix it into a cool movie.  Check out the one I made in about 15 minutes.</p>
<p><a href="http://animoto.com/play/mGYLYzrN50HMZBtHJboEBg" target="_blank">http://animoto.com/play/mGYLYzrN50HMZBtHJboEBg</a></p>
<p>Misty</p>
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		<title>Podcast</title>
		<link>http://burnworthedu.edublogs.org/2008/08/05/podcast/</link>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 05 Aug 2008 16:35:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I created a podcast to give my students some information about their teacher.
Learning About Your Teacher
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I created a podcast to give my students some information about their teacher.</p>
<p><a href="http://burnworthedu.edublogs.org/files/2008/08/interview-mrs-burnworth.m4a">Learning About Your Teacher</a></p>
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		<title>Design</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 05 Aug 2008 13:20:14 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>burnworthedu</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Content Map
Here is a content map that demonstrates the learning that will need to take place prior to using the Wiki site.  It flows from the bottom to the top, final objectives.

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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<h3>Content Map</h3>
<p>Here is a content map that demonstrates the learning that will need to take place prior to using the Wiki site.  It flows from the bottom to the top, final objectives.</p>
<p><a href="http://burnworthedu.edublogs.org/files/2008/08/wikicontent-map.png"><img class="aligncenter size-full wp-image-14" src="http://burnworthedu.edublogs.org/files/2008/08/wikicontent-map.png" alt="" width="500" height="409" /></a></p>
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		<title>Analysis</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 04 Aug 2008 18:18:37 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>burnworthedu</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Not Another Book Report!
Responses to literature are a standard in the upper elementary grades.  Frequently they are boring for the students to do, cumbersome for the students to complete regularly, and frustrating for teachers to teach and grade.  A solution to these problems could be found in Web 2.0 technologies.  Blogs, Wikis, [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<h3>Not Another Book Report!</h3>
<p>Responses to literature are a standard in the upper elementary grades.  Frequently they are boring for the students to do, cumbersome for the students to complete regularly, and frustrating for teachers to teach and grade.  A solution to these problems could be found in Web 2.0 technologies.  Blogs, Wikis,  and social-networking are interactive, collaborative ways the students can use the internet to share information and create.<span id="more-12"></span></p>
<p>California Language Arts Standards for Fourth Grade</p>
<ul>
<li>Literary Response and Analysis &#8211; Students read and respond to a wide variety of significant works of children&#8217;s literature.  They distinguish between the structural features of the text and the literary terms (them plot, setting, characters).</li>
<li>Writing Strategies &#8211; Students write clear, coherent sentences and paragraphs that develop a central idea.  Their writing shows they consider the audience and purpose.  Students progress through the stages of the writing process (pre-writing, drafting, revising, editing).<!--more--></li>
</ul>
<p>Traditionally, teachers have met these standards by assigning a multitude of book reports.  Therein lies an abundance of problems:</p>
<ul>
<li>Students are bored with the tedious task of writing a structured book report.</li>
<li>The students&#8217; writing style is boring.</li>
<li>Students are lazy and careless with grammar and punctuation.</li>
</ul>
<p>because</p>
<ul>
<li>Students don&#8217;t have an actual audience or real purpose.</li>
<li>They rarely get feedback on their writing.</li>
</ul>
<p>Teachers rarely give feedback because:</p>
<ul>
<li>The students&#8217; writing is boring.</li>
<li>The teachers have to make so many corrections.</li>
<li>Who cares what the teacher has to say?</li>
<li>Previous corrections are corrected again and again.</li>
<li>There are too many students&#8217; papers to grade.</li>
<li>Shuffling papers around (making copies, filing, passing back, and student revisions) is tedious for the teacher.<!--more--></li>
</ul>
<p>My goal is to have students:</p>
<ul>
<li> Be excited about sharing their thoughts and ideas about books that they have read.</li>
<li>Use their own voice in their writing.</li>
<li>Care about what they are writing, so that they make less negligent errors in punctuation and grammar.</li>
<li>Share their writing with their classmates, family, and friends.</li>
</ul>
<h3><!--more-->Audience</h3>
<p>The audience will be upper grade elementary students between the ages of 8 and 12.</p>
<ul>
<li>According to school records 85% of the students are English language learners from beginner to fluent.</li>
<li>Forty percent of the students are classified as Gifted.</li>
<li>Reading levels range from second to fifth grade.</li>
<li>Writing skills vary from three to four sentence paragraphs to complete five-paragraph essays.</li>
<li>There is a discrepancy between the students abilities and the level of their work primarily because of a lack  of motivation and interest.</li>
</ul>
<p>Technology</p>
<p>The students at Normal Heights Elementary have bee using laptops for word processing, research, and projects for two years, so their knowledge of computer terminology and processes is good.  They know how to</p>
<ul>
<li>Turn on and off the computers.</li>
<li>Open and use Microsoft Word and PowerPoint</li>
<li>Use web browsers and search engines.</li>
<li>Save pictures and documents to designated files.</li>
<li>Some students have had experience with creating GooglePages.</li>
</ul>
<p><!--more--></p>
<h3>User&#8217;s Needs</h3>
<p>The students need:</p>
<ul>
<li>To see real world applications of literary discussions.</li>
<li>Be involved in real world literary discussions.</li>
<li>To have an audience that reads their work.</li>
<li>Regular feedback on their work by peers and teachers.</li>
<li>A place to create and save work online so that the teachers and other students can read and review.</li>
<li>A way to be creative and still meet the state standards.</li>
<li>Easy to follow directions to refer to while they are accessing the online environment.</li>
<li>Simple website to access, use, save, and add to.</li>
</ul>
<p><!--more--></p>
<h3>Environment</h3>
<p>The students will be using their classroom computers to access the website, but they should also be able to access it from the library or from a home computer.  Therefore passwords and user names will need to be accessible to students.  The site also needs to be protected to avoid any &#8220;Imperial entanglements.&#8221;  Parents and administration feel more secure when the students use protected sites.</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px">Wikispaces allows teachers to create a protected site for free.  The only requirement is that users have an email address, which could be bypassed by creating a pseudo Gmail account for each student.</p>
<p>The teachers need to be able to view recent additions and changes to monitor activity both productive and non-productive, so the teacher needs a site that provides notifications and history logs.</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px">Wikispaces gives the creator of the site the ability to view the history of pages, give feed back through the discussion tab, and get email updates or RSS feeds about recent additions to the site.</p>
<p>They will need a site that is easy to use and fun looking to increase usage and motivation.</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px">Wikispaces is easy to use.   Adding text and text features (bullets, headings, and pictures) is similar using Word, by using the toolbar.   The tool bar also lets the users add links, widgets (calendars, video, and maps),  and tables.  The side bar makes connecting the students pages easy.</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px"><!--more--></p>
<h3>Resources and Limitations</h3>
<ul>
<li>The students have laptops with wireless internet connection.   Although only 40 % of the students at this school site have access to computers at home, the library has computers available for use before and after school.</li>
<li>The teacher will need to create email accounts for all students, so the students can be added to the Members list.  This could be very cumbersome for classes of 25 or more students.  There is no other way to add users at this time.</li>
<li>At this time, the prototype will include three members as examples.</li>
<li>Prior to presenting this website to students, the teacher will need to find acceptable uses of book talks, blogs, and wikis for examples to students.</li>
</ul>
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		<title>Final Project</title>
		<link>http://burnworthedu.edublogs.org/2008/07/20/final-project/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Jul 2008 22:09:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[This next year I will be teaching a 3/4 combo class with only 20 students.  I am kind of excited because then I will be able to manage my tech stuff much more easily.  I am planing to create some type of book blog, where the kids could write reviews of articles or books, and [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This next year I will be teaching a 3/4 combo class with only 20 students.  I am kind of excited because then I will be able to manage my tech stuff much more easily.  I am planing to create some type of book blog, where the kids could write reviews of articles or books, and other kids could respond.</p>
<p>I am trying to figure out how to set it up so the kids could create a new post themselves, and others could respond to that post.   I would also like to use <a href="http://voicethread.com">VoiceThread </a>for book reviews too.  Maybe we can add that as a feature to our classroom blog.</p>
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		<title>Home</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 16 Jul 2008 01:03:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Welcome to My EduBlog

This is my Comet EduBlog site.
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<p>This is my Comet EduBlog site.</p>
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